Kojack's Movies

[SolidSnake76]

here are my set of videos. now this being my first time and all, the first three are pretty sloppy, i know that. i will remake them later on. in a meantime, tell me what u think, critism is allowed, let me know how i can make them better.

Kojack150 - The God of War

Dancing with the Tank

The Cave of Madness

Desert Getaway

The Most Dangerous Game

[all luck]

I just watched the first one and it kinda bored me and it was really choppy didn't see to many good kills.

[Cylon]

First of all, the quality was really bad, probably because your host is YouTube. It was also very choppy, but once again it was probably due to the host. I would suggest that you use a better host next time, since YouTube is one of the worst.

There was basically no editing in the whole video. You showed yourself wandering around for several seconds before killing someone. Next time, edit your clips so you only show the kills, and not all the wandering around.

The kills were decent, nothing too extraordinary. I would avoid showing yourself getting kills with any ranged explosives. That really doesn't show much, and it is not to entertaining to the viewer. Also, I wouldn't show the weapon selection screen in a video.