Zerohack And -graff-

[-Graff-]

Me and zerohack (.-LiQuId_FiR3-.) made our first video. I'll upload it to a new host soon!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tcthTecfd38 <--- Stream
http://rapidshare.de/files/20115025/...rsion.mpg.html <--- Download
My version is coming soon (after I finish & convert it )

[Focus]

It could have been a lot better..

Prone sniping is just...no.
The first clip of the video you couldn't even see the actual kill.
When there's a lot of shooting, you should try and cut it smaller, so it's closer to the kill. (like with the pistol v. pistol in crucible)
A lot of those kills were just normal kills that you do all the time when you play.
When you had the "Graff comes to save me" caption or whatever it said, it was up for way too long, and it was dead center of the screen..so you couldn't see what the hell was going.
Could have used a better song.

[Cylon]

Like Focus said, that text really needs to go. I mean it would have been fine if it were not for the: color, placement, and the duration it was on the screen.

A lot of the kills were from Crucible SEALS when yu guys were outside. Nothing really spectacular or challenging about that. Most of them were easy kills, since the terrorists have no place to go.

Basically the whole entire video was sniping. I would have rather seen a nice mixture of gunning and sniping. I would not have included the one prone sniping part.

For your next video, chose a variety of clips. Not just sniping. Have a wide variety of maps as well as being on different sides (not just SEALS). Try to collect a lot of clips are really good kills, rather then making a video with medicore action.

[-Graff-]

Don't tear me up. zerohack did this one. Mine is in progress. Plus this was only two maps :-/

[discombobulate]

Originally Posted by -Graff-

Don't tear me up. zerohack did this one. Mine is in progress. Plus this was only two maps :-/

Don't post it if you aren't prepared for criticism.


I'll be blunt, that was a waste of my time. Completely average kills, music sucked, quality was weak, obnoxious text. If you're going to include sniping, don't include any of the following:

a) prone sniping
b) sniping people that aren't even looking at you
c) "quick sniping" really really slowly
d) any combonation of the above

Take mroe time in the next video. A first time mistake for the ages, wanting to make a video as quick as possible. Take some time, get different maps, it gives the video a better feel. Get better kills, it makes the video better.

[Dionysus]

I agree with what the others said.

Take some time, like a week at least, to play some games and get good footage. Dont just play two maps and decide to make a video out of it.

[-Graff-]

Originally Posted by Dionysus

I agree with what the others said.

Take some time, like a week at least, to play some games and get good footage. Dont just play two maps and decide to make a video out of it.

I 100% agree with all of you, (exepct for -SuFi, I really didn't make this one, I told zerohack to come look at this but he never posted anything. But everything that you said, besides that, was dead on). My version of the video won't come out for a while... until I get better footage of both of us and not just mostly one. Plus this was just a rough draft :-/

[Wolfe jr.]

that video bored me... lol..
the music really killed me!

[-Graff-]

Yeah, I told him to use the song "Thats Entertainment" by Powerman 5000... obviously he didn't ...

[discombobulate]

Originally Posted by -Graff-

I 100% agree with all of you, (exepct for -SuFi, I really didn't make this one, I told zerohack to come look at this but he never posted anything. But everything that you said, besides that, was dead on). My version of the video won't come out for a while... until I get better footage of both of us and not just mostly one. Plus this was just a rough draft :-/

Funny, considering everything I said someone else had said too.