my 2nd ever creation

union-jack · 02-15-2006

hows this for a second sig ?? again, comments please, good, bad and ugly

Spike · 02-15-2006

Too monotone. The render is too blended and takes a second to find its key features. Text is alright. Good work.

G0NZ0 · 02-15-2006

too many tech brushes and def to monotone it looks good for a beginner tho keep it up and im already seeing improvement bro. PROPS!

NightFoxx · 02-16-2006

that's 20x better than anything I could come up with...

Although, I might add some more color.

DeAtHaBiT · 02-16-2006

Get rid of the text and it will be fine.

Jon · 02-16-2006

looks good for your second ever... but try not to make monotone sigs and keep the render its actual color..

Sgt. Knuck · 02-16-2006

For your second ever it's pretty decent, maybe add some more colour, the text isn't bad, keep it up.

union-jack · 03-13-2006

here we are, ive taken some of the advice onboard and had a little tinker around with it, heres my latest result, comments please..

Go Pre · 03-13-2006

Dude, the first one looked great, I don't know how people can criticize anything about it (besides it being monotone). Your updated version in my mind is 10x worse than your first...sometimes listening to people's comments on here is not the best course of action.

Cheesy · 03-13-2006

I agree. The first one looked fantastic. Maybe it was all one solid color, but that's a style. Don't always have to follow the crowd. Now, you could add some contrast elements to push it off the bland scale, otherwise I liked it.

The second one, not so good. Didn't jump at me like the first one did.