Yes, you can reword some of the sentences. I havent gotten around to do a full blown editorial yet...but Ill get to it.
As for the GS...I have no idea

Theyre not replying to my posts or PMs so we'll either have to

Just post the guide for November 1st and re-format it later

You or a Crew member who knows how to use Photoshop or w/e can whip up a quick template