my 2nd ever creation
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02-15-2006
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Join Date: May 2005
Location: birmingham UK
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my 2nd ever creation
hows this for a second sig ?? again, comments please, good, bad and ugly
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02-15-2006
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Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: in your breads, eatin' your sammich
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Too monotone. The render is too blended and takes a second to find its key features. Text is alright. Good work.
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02-15-2006
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: My Freakin House Trick
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too many tech brushes and def to monotone it looks good for a beginner tho keep it up and im already seeing improvement bro. PROPS!
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02-16-2006
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Dallas, Tx
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that's 20x better than anything I could come up with...
Although, I might add some more color.
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02-16-2006
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Dallas
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Get rid of the text and it will be fine.
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02-16-2006
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Cranston, RI
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looks good for your second ever... but try not to make monotone sigs and keep the render its actual color..
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02-16-2006
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Location: Ontario
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For your second ever it's pretty decent, maybe add some more colour, the text isn't bad, keep it up.
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03-13-2006
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Join Date: May 2005
Location: birmingham UK
Posts: 222
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here we are, ive taken some of the advice onboard and had a little tinker around with it, heres my latest result, comments please..
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03-13-2006
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Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Long Island
Age: 20
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Dude, the first one looked great, I don't know how people can criticize anything about it (besides it being monotone). Your updated version in my mind is 10x worse than your first...sometimes listening to people's comments on here is not the best course of action.
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03-13-2006
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Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: Somewhere around Dallas, TX.
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I agree. The first one looked fantastic. Maybe it was all one solid color, but that's a style. Don't always have to follow the crowd. Now, you could add some contrast elements to push it off the bland scale, otherwise I liked it.
The second one, not so good. Didn't jump at me like the first one did.
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